comments for Soohyun.
consider about using big wire for binding or coiling around.
suggestion about typefaces in ‘significant point’
– not stand out much
– move ‘nature of the work’ to other space so it can have more spaces around ‘significant point’
– change the leading size
suggestion about type treatment
– too many styles (italic, regular, heavy…), just use 2 type faces.
‘profession’ : have more leading size
suggestion about body type : not that readable, too wide themselves (if you use wider column, it would be better)
just use little bar that indicates where readers are.
“A” page : make it more interesting (e.g. index, table of contents, give it small fun, identity… )
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John Caserta, instructor
Milan Nedved, TA